Reasons why people would want to have part time jobs.
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I think there are many reasons why people would want to have part time jobs.
In my case, I would want to have part time jobs because I want to earn my allowance on my own and experience the society.
But sadly I had no call from the theater near my house.
(Do you remember that I had a part time job interview on last Friday?)
And the most common reason why people do part time jobs is to earn some money.
Also, I heard some people do their part time jobs to change their introverted personalities or meet other people.
And I want to explain why one of the reasons Koreans would have part time jobs is to understand the society. When we are a student, many adults emphasize only studying. Until we are older than 20, there is no chance to suffer the real society; we just know about the theoretical society.
So some people including me say they are doing their part time jobs to experience the society.
But it's just my opinion. So don't count on it much.
Bye;)
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!!
A pleasant morning.
I am so sorry to hear that you haven\'t gotten a call. However, don\'t lose heart yet because it\'s only Monday. :)
Anyway, whatever reasons you may have in having a part time job, as long as you\'re happy with it then
it would still be good!
Keep that positive outlook in life!
T.Kristel-
I think there are many reasons why people would want to have part time jobs.
>> CORRECT!!In my case, I would want to have part time jobs because I want to earn my allowance on my own and experience the society.
>> CORRECT!!But sadly I had no call from the theater near my house.
>> CORRECT!!(Do you remember that I had a part time job interview on last Friday?)
>> (Do you remember that I had a part time job interview last Friday?)
And the most common reason why people do part time jobs is to earn some money.
>> CORRECT!!Also, I heard some people do their part time jobs to change their introverted personalities or meet other people.
>> CORRECT!!And I want to explain why one of the reasons Koreans would have part time jobs is to understand the society.
>> However, I want to explain why one of the reasons Koreans why would like to have part time jobs is to understand the society.
When we are a student, many adults emphasize only studying.
>> CORRECT!!
Until we are older than 20, there is no chance to suffer the real society; we just know about the theoretical society.
>> Until we are older than 20, there is no chance to feel the real society; we just know about the theoretical society.
So some people including me say they are doing their part time jobs to experience the society.
>> CORRECT!!But it\'s just my opinion. So don\'t count on it much.
>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!Bye;)
>> CORRECT!!
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