recurrence of cold.

2010-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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Good evening. jenny.~ Actually, today i didn't prepare for study. because suddenly i had lost desire for study. but after finised class, I realized that without preview I couldn't concentrate on talking. after class i was busy so I couldn't do study and I couldn't review it until now. but i am going to study when I go home.^ ^ it's a recurrece of cold what i wanted to tell you. In Korea, between march and april, there is a cold weather in the blooming sesson. we called it 'GGod Sam '. it means the cold weather jealous of flower. so cold windy blow again to stop blooming.

강사 첨삭

[이름], I perfectly understand what you are going through this time. There were times when we get a little tired or we lose our desire for something. This is a normal thing, I guess. During the class, I was not able to understand what you were saying because you told me something about a Korean belief. It is not common in other countries and it is the first time I heard about it. Anyway, I think it is very interesting. Now I understand what “ggod sam” is. Thank you very much! I hope you have a great day and I’ll talk with you in class tomorrow! ^^ XOXO,Jenny Good evening. Jenny. >>Correct.Actually, today i didn't prepare for study. because suddenly i had lost desire for study >>Today, I didn’t prepare for our class because I suddenly lost my desire to study. but after finised class, I realized that without preview I couldn't concentrate on talking. >>But, after the class, I realized that without preparation, I can’t concentrate on talking. after class i was busy so I couldn't do study and I couldn't review it until now. >>After the class, I was busy so I was not able to study and review until now. But I am going to study when I go home. ^ ^ >>Correct.it's a recurrece of cold what i wanted to tell you. >>It’s the recurrence of cold weather that I wanted to tell you.  In Korea, between march and april, there is a cold weather in the blooming sesson. >>In Korea, in between March and April, there is an occurrence of a cold weather in the blooming season. we called it 'GGod Sam '. it means the cold weather jealous of flower. >>We call it “Ggod Sam”, which means “the cold weather is jealous of the flowers”. so cold windy blow again to stop blooming. >>So cold wind blows again to stop the flowers from blossoming.    

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