Recurring headache
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When there is a recurring headache, I think we should go to see a doctor. When I was told that my headache was not due to blood pressure or any problem of my brain but due to stress or lack of sleep, I was a little relieved. Because I thought I could resolve my headache through some changes in my routine. Of course, the pills prescribed in the hospital helped to relieve my headache. The pills included tranquilizers,so I could fall asleep quickly when taking a pill. I think going to see a doctor is for finding out exact reasons for some symptoms or diseases. Some symptoms or diseases can be cured by knowing the reasons.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
I agree with you. Seeing a doctor immediately and finding the cause can help prevent a disease or illness from becoming more severe, so it’s better to do that. Also, if we look on the bright side, experiencing pain can be a warning to get checked. It tells us that something is wrong and needs to be changed or fixed.
- T. Caitlyn
When there is a recurring headache, I think we should go to see a doctor.
>> CORRECT
When I was told that my headache was not due to blood pressure or any problem of my brain but due to stress or lack of sleep, I was a little relieved.
>> CORRECT
Because I thought I could resolve my headache through some changes in my routine.
>> I was relieved because I thought I could resolve my headache through some changes in my routine.
Of course, the pills prescribed in the hospital helped to relieve my headache.
>> CORRECT
The pills included tranquilizers,so I could fall asleep quickly when taking a pill.
>> The pills included tranquilizers, so I could fall asleep quickly when taking them.
I think going to see a doctor is for finding out exact reasons for some symptoms or diseases.
>> I think going to see a doctor is for finding out the exact causes of some symptoms or diseases.
Some symptoms or diseases can be cured by knowing the reasons.
>> Some symptoms or diseases can be treated once the causes are known.
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