recycle

2018-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

학생이 쓴 원문

i usually recycle reusable things at home. i have bins for collecting trash in the balcony. so i put them seperately in there. after colltcting them a lot, i throw away them together. in korea we have to use special plastic bags when we throw away trash. so i put trash in that plastic bags and throw them in front of my hous. in the case of plastic things, i usually wash them clearly. becaues to recycle them, it need to be clear without any residue. also i freeze food waste because of stink.

강사 첨삭

Hello Yen!

As always, thank you for once again accomplishing your composition homework. Reading your ideas was fun. Keep up the good work! ^^

~~Teacher Kate


1.I usually recycle reusable things at home.

>>>CORRECT!

OR>>>I usually recycle things that are still usable.
2. i have bins for collecting trash in the balcony
so i put them seperately in there.

>>>CORRECT!

OR>>>I have separate bins for biodegradable and non-biodegradable trash in my balcony.

3. after colltcting them a lot, i throw away them together.

>>>When the bins are full, I dispose them all at once.
4. in korea we have to use special plastic bags when we throw away trash.

>>>CORRECT!

OR>>>We are required to use special plastic bags for disposing our garbage.

5. so i put trash in that plastic bags and throw them in front of my hous.

>>>So, I put the trash in those plastic bags and put them in front of my house.
6. in the case of plastic things, i usually wash them clearly.

>>>For plastic wastes, I usually wash them clean.
7. becaues to recycle them, it need to be clear without any residue.

>>>Because, to recycle them, they need to be clean first without any residue left.
8. also i freeze food waste because of stink.

>>>Also, I freeze food waste first to lessen the stink.

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