recycle
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Yen!
As always, thank you for once again accomplishing your composition homework. Reading your ideas was fun. Keep up the good work! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
1.I usually recycle reusable things at home.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>I usually recycle things that are still usable.
2. i have bins for collecting trash in the balcony so i put them seperately in there.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>I have separate bins for biodegradable and non-biodegradable trash in my balcony.
3. after colltcting them a lot, i throw away them together.
>>>When the bins are full, I dispose them all at once.
4. in korea we have to use special plastic bags when we throw away trash.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>We are required to use special plastic bags for disposing our garbage.
5. so i put trash in that plastic bags and throw them in front of my hous.
>>>So, I put the trash in those plastic bags and put them in front of my house.
6. in the case of plastic things, i usually wash them clearly.
>>>For plastic wastes, I usually wash them clean.
7. becaues to recycle them, it need to be clear without any residue.
>>>Because, to recycle them, they need to be clean first without any residue left.
8. also i freeze food waste because of stink.
>>>Also, I freeze food waste first to lessen the stink.
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