Reddy and Letty
학생이 쓴 원문
The teddy bear part was the most fun to me. Because I was able to show Reddy and Letty to someone again like this. Reddy and Letty are friends I have been with since I was born, so they are really the most precious of my friends. The first friends I see are Reddy and Letty when I enter my room, and they are the first friends to greet me when I enter the house and have dinner, and when I enter the room with snacks. It was fascinating to show these friends to others, but I was also really happy. I\'m really grateful for this topic that making such good memories to me.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Maria!
I had so much fun too showing my stinky stuffed toys as they are my sons. Finally, your Reddy and Letty met my Chimpy, Panda, and Blue Beary through Skype.
When I see our stuffed toys, that means it\'s time to sleep and relax so I am also very happy to see them just as you do.
Take care of them as they do to you.
See you tomorrow!
-T. Donna =)
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Because I was able to show Reddy and Letty to someone again like this.
>> Correct!
Reddy and Letty are friends I have been with since I was born, so they are really the most precious of my friends.
>> Correct!
The first friends I see are Reddy and Letty when I enter my room, and they are the first friends to greet me when I enter the house and have dinner, and when I enter the room with snacks.
>> Correct!
It was fascinating to show these friends to others, but I was also really happy.
>> Correct!
>> Correct!
I\'m really grateful for this topic that making such good memories to me.
>> I\'m really grateful for this topic that make such good memories to me.
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