reduction in air travel
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I don’t think there will be a reduction in air travel because the science will continue to develop. the technology of the science about air machine(plane) will reduce the time of the air travel and make more comfortable. And I belive that
I think there will be a increase in air travel
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I don’t think there will be a reduction in air travel because the science will continue to develop. the technology of the science about air machine(plane) will reduce the time of the air travel and make more comfortable.
>>> I don’t think there will be a reduction in air travel because the science will continue to develop the technology of the science about air machine(plane) which will reduce the time of the air travel and make it more comfortable.
And I belive that I think there will be a increase in air travel
>>> I believe air travel will increase more.
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