redy set hop!!!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ji[이름]! You did an incredible job in re-telling this story. It\'s quite fascinating and hilarious.
However, I would like you to observe proper capitalization and punctuation when you write something.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
matty and moe are two happy frogs.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Matty and Moe are two happy frogs.
then one day matty said to moe that he is more skiny then moe.
>> One day, Matty told Moe that he is skinnier than him.
so he said he can hop better than moe.
>> So he can hop better than Moe.
so they had a hopping contest.
>> As a result, they had a hopping contest.
at first moe win the game.
>> At first, Moe won the game.
then matty said that it wasn\'t fair.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: But Matty said that it wasn\'t fair.
so they had 6 more games.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Therefore, they had 6 more games.
and matty said it was still not fair.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: However, Matty said it was still not fair.
so they had one more game.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: So they had one more game.
then finily matty said it was fair.
>> Finally, Matty said that it was fair.
THE END
>> CORRECT!
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