Reflect on a time when you faced midweek challenges. How did you overcome them, and what motivated y

2024-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Ryka

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There are some ways to overcome boring midweek. First, if I would be very busy, I don\'t have time to feel about boring something. Second, If I do interesting something like a planning on the weekend, the time would go fast.

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Hello! I\'m really pleased you took the time to finish the homework. Your insights and ideas were shared excellently—keep up the fantastic work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


There are some ways to overcome boring midweek.
>> There are some ways to overcome a boring midweek. 

First, if I would be very busy, I don\'t have time to feel about boring something.
>> First, if I keep myself very busy, I won\'t have time to feel bored. 

Second, If I do interesting something like a planning on the weekend, the time would go fast.
>> Second, if I do something interesting, like planning for the weekend, time will pass quickly.

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