Reflect on the past year: What are you most proud of, and what lessons have you learned?
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Last year, I acheived something that I want.
I passed the job interview so I move new company and also acheived own house.
While I work new company, I have learned a lot. because every company have each culture or working style.
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Hi there! I’m so pleased you completed the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your thoughts and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
Last year, I acheived something that I want.
>> Last year, I achieved something I wanted.
I passed the job interview so I move new company and also acheived own house.
>> I passed a job interview, so I moved to a new company and also bought my own house.
While I work new company, I have learned a lot. because every company have each culture or working style.
>> While working at my new company, I have learned a lot because every company has its own culture and working style.
>> Last year, I achieved something I wanted.
I passed the job interview so I move new company and also acheived own house.
>> I passed a job interview, so I moved to a new company and also bought my own house.
While I work new company, I have learned a lot. because every company have each culture or working style.
>> While working at my new company, I have learned a lot because every company has its own culture and working style.
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