Regarding the same sexual marrige
학생이 쓴 원문
I do not have a positive opinoin about the same sexual marrige but I do not agree with it.
I think this isuue is a matter of individual values and they should be respected unless it hurts orthers.
Now, we know it is not disease!
If my daughter introduces a lesbian to us as a spouse, I feel disappointed but I will try to aceept it.
Iif I were a gay, my parents would love me.
Of course, this is still one of big social issues in Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hi YJ!
I\'m happy to know that you\'re extending your opinions about some matters here.
This is a good way for you to expand more of your thoughts.
Anyway, I noticed that you have many misspelled words. Try to be aware with it.
Let\'s see more of your corrections.
I do not have a positive opinoin about the same sexual marrige but I do not agree with it.
>> I do not have a positive opinion about the same sex marriage and I do not agree with it.
I think this isuue is a matter of individual values and they should be respected unless it hurts orthers.
>> I think this issue is a matter of individual stand and they should be respected unless if it hurts others.
Now, we know it is not disease!
>> Now, we know that it is not a disease!
If my daughter introduces a lesbian to us as a spouse, I feel disappointed but I will try to aceept it.
>> If my daughter introduces a lesbian to us as a spouse, I will feel disappointed but I will try to accept it.
Iif I were a gay, my parents would love me.
>> If I were a gay, my parents would love me.
Of course, this is still one of big social issues in Korea.
>> Of course, this is still one of the big social issues in Korea.
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