Regaridng the importantance of e-mail.
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Hello YJ,
There is value in allowing yourself to learn, even if the task is not accomplished as quickly, efficiently or effectively as you expected. You can get things done if you do have the courage to do so, but most importantly, you should allow yourself to learn new things and build your confidence that you can effectively open the door to success.
T. Jeny
E-mail is one of the most important means of communication in business.
>>correct
Of coruse, E-mail is not as fast as a phone call, but it can share a lot of information accurately and
remains in a document.
>>Of course, e-mail is not as fast as a phone call but it can share a lot of information accurately and it can be saved in a document.
So, you can always check it again later.
>>correct
Further ore, the attachment function e-mail also allows you to send and receive a lot of information
quickly, easily, and without limitation on capacity.
>> Furthermore, the attachment function e-mail also allows you to send and receive a lot of information quickly, easily, and without limitation in capacity.
One of the most important roles of email is to defend us as a basis in an unwanted dispute with a partner or customer.
>>One of the most important roles of email is to defend us as proof in an unwanted dispute with a partner or customer.
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