Regular checkup.
학생이 쓴 원문
I had a regular check up a couple of months ago.
and I got a result of it.
There has been some changes on my health.
Suprisingly the level of cholesterol decreased by half
compared with the one of last year.
So I think it has worked.
Even though I didn't do exercise at all,
My body got better.
That result made me have confidence that my diet therapy was good.
I am expecting next year's result.
강사 첨삭
It's great to know that I have a very healthy student. Keep it up! Talk to you later. -Teacher JM
I had a regular check up a couple of months ago.
>>>Correct
and I got a result of it.
>>>And I (just) got the results.
There has been some changes on my health.
>>>There had been some changes on my health.Suprisingly the level of cholesterol decreased by half compared with the one of last year.
>>>Suprisingly,my level of (blood) cholesterol decreased by half compared to the test I had last year.So I think it has worked.
>>>So I think my diet has worked. ( you have not yet mentioned your diet up to now, so the sentence is ambiguous here.)Even though I didn't do exercise at all,
>>>Even though I didn't do any exercise at all,My body got better.
>>>CorrectThat result made me have confidence that my diet therapy was good.
>>>CorrectI am expecting next year's result.
>>>Correct
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