Regular checkup.

2010-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 janel

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I had a regular check up a couple of months ago. and I got a result of it. There has been some changes on my health. Suprisingly the level of cholesterol decreased by half compared with the one of last year. So I think it has worked. Even though I didn't do exercise at all, My body got better. That result made me have confidence that my diet therapy was good. I am expecting next year's result.

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It's great to know that I have a very healthy student. Keep it up! Talk to you later. -Teacher JM   I had a regular check up a couple of months ago. >>>Correct and I got a result of it. >>>And I (just) got the results. There has been some changes on my health. >>>There had been some changes on my health.Suprisingly the level of cholesterol decreased by half compared with the one of last year. >>>Suprisingly,my level of (blood) cholesterol decreased by half compared to the test I had last year.So I think it has worked. >>>So I think my diet has worked. ( you have not yet mentioned your diet up to now, so the sentence is ambiguous here.)Even though I didn't do exercise at all, >>>Even though I didn't do any exercise at all,My body got better. >>>CorrectThat result made me have confidence that my diet therapy was good. >>>CorrectI am expecting next year's result. >>>Correct  

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