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When I am sick,I normally go to a private hospital or clinic in my neighborhood rather than a general hospital for several reasons. First, general hospitals are always crowded with many patients or visitors, so I have to wait for a long time to see a doctor. And to go to a general hospital, I have to go to long distance by a transportation and it\'s bothering thing. In addition, the doctors and nurses are less kind than those in private hospitals. Lastly, the prices of private hospitals are more reasonable.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
It’s nice that there is a private hospital or clinic in your neighborhood that you trust and can go to whenever you are sick. I think it makes things more convenient for you. There are also a lot of private clinics in my city; however, people here still prefer to go to hospitals because it is cheaper. As you know, not everyone has insurance that they can use for medical check-ups.
- T. Caitlyn
When I am sick, I normally go to a private hospital or clinic in my neighborhood rather than a general hospital for several reasons.
>> CORRECT
First, general hospitals are always crowded with many patients or visitors, so I have to wait for a long time to see a doctor.
>> CORRECT
And to go to a general hospital, I have to go to long distance by a transportation and it\'s bothering thing.
>> Additionally, going to a general hospital requires traveling a long distance by transportation, which is bothersome.
In addition, the doctors and nurses are less kind than those in private hospitals.
>> CORRECT
Lastly, the prices of private hospitals are more reasonable.
>> CORRECT
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