Regular maintenance
학생이 쓴 원문
I try to fix as soon as I discover something wrong. And after my tenents move to other houses, I always examine if there\\\'s anything that should be fixed and have it fixed quickly. Also I hired those who clean the stairs, the roof top, pocking lot and hallways. Every Friday they come and clean my building and report something wrong.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
Wow! I did not know that maintaining a building involves a lot of work and is costly. It\'s nice to know that, as an owner, you try to fix everything as soon as possible to avoid further damages.
- T. Caitlyn
I try to fix as soon as I discover something wrong.
>> CORRECT
And after my tenents move to other houses, I always examine if there\\\'s anything that should be fixed and have it fixed quickly.
>> CORRECT
Also I hired those who clean the stairs, the roof top, pocking lot and hallways.
>> Also, I hire those who clean the stairs, the rooftop, parking lot, and hallways.
Every Friday they come and clean my building and report something wrong.
>> Every Friday, they come and clean my building and report anything that is wrong.
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