Relationship

Dear [Name]. [이름],

T.G.I.F.~~~!!! ^.^

Happy Monday! ^,^

I admire the love that the bride and groom have for each other.

Time can really test love.

Age can do that more.

Somehow, I also want this kind of relationship.

I want to be with the man who will be with me forever.

Thank you for sharing this story to me! ^^

Anyway, happy reading! ^^,

See you very soon! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

There was a wedding ceremony in Myungdong Catholic church.

>> There was a wedding ceremony in Myungding Catholic Church. (The first C in CHURCH should be big, because it is part of the church\'s name.)

A Catholic priest said to bride and bridegroom, \" You have been waiting for a long time and looking for each other from a long distance.\"

>> A Catholic priest said to the bride and bridegroom, \"You have been waiting for a long time and looking for each other from a long disyance.\" (There should be THE before BRIDE.)

>> OR: A Catholic priest said to the bride and groom, \"You have been waiting for a long time and looking for each other from a long disyance.\"

All of the congratulator smiled as agreed with that saying.
>> I THINK IT IS BETTER TO SAY: All of the attendees of the event smiled as they agreed with that saying.

That is because both bride and bridegroom are over 40s of age and met each other too late.

>> CORRECT!

The bridegroom have emigrated to the USA, Chicago, in early childhood and bride have lived in Seoul, Korea.

>> The bridegroom has emigrated to Chicago, USA  in early childhood and the bride has lived in Seoul, Korea. (USA, CHICAGO should be CHICAGO, USA. The city comes first. There should be THE before BRIDE.)

So, it was a great match made in heaven which was long waiting and finding from far distance.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Therefore, it was a great match made in heaven which was long waiting and finding from far distance.

We are reconsidering the special relationship of the love that they found in another continent and at over the age of good time for marriage.

>> IT IS BETTER TO SAY: We are reconsidering the special relationship of the love that they found in each other\'s continent and at over the age of goos time for marriage.

We are getting realize the mystery of relationship by aging.

>> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: We are realizing the mystery of relationship by aging.

>> OR: We get to realize the mystery of relationship by aging.

First seeing to someone can be beautiful and a scene of drama.

>> IT IS BETTER TO SAY: First seeing someone can be beautiful and with a scene of drama.

Everyone in the crowd ara valuable and all of them are flowers, but we don\'t realize the facts that the relationships between human which get by aging are more beautiful than flowers

>> Everyone in the crowd is valuable and all of them are flowers, but we don\'t realize the facts that the relationships between human which get by aging are more beautiful than flowers. (ARA should be IS.)