Relationship between horse and human
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I would like to describe horse with the words \'speedy, smart and familiar\'. I believe everyone knows that horses are really speedy. There are lots of horse running competitions and when we watch the action movies most of the soldiers are riding horses to chase the enemies. Like this, horses are deeply connected in our lives. Not only the movies, but also in our regular lives. In the past, lots of people used horses as their transportation. This is why I feel so close to horse not like the other animals.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Melody!
The relationship between humans and horses, which spans centuries and cultures all over the world, is based on mutual respect, trust, and understanding.
Strong performing ability, exceptional health, a calm temperament, balanced conformation, and a respectable lineage are all desirable traits in a horse.
In addition to delivering boundless delight and adventure, they offer companionship, enhance mental and physical health, and impart important life skills.
__T. Mayleen :)
I would like to describe horse with the words \'speedy, smart and familiar\'.
>>> I would like to describe a horse with the words \'speedy, smart, and familiar.\'
believe everyone knows that horses are really speedy.
>>> I believe everyone knows that horses are really speedy.
There are lots of horse running competitions and when we watch the action movies most of the soldiers are riding horses to chase the enemies.
>>> There are lots of horse-running competitions, and when we watch the action movies, most of the soldiers are riding horses to chase the enemies.
Like this, horses are deeply connected in our lives.
>>> Like these animals, horses are deeply connected in our lives.
Not only the movies, but also in our regular lives.
>>> It\'s not only in movies but also in our regular lives.
In the past, lots of people used horses as their transportation. This is why I feel so close to horse not like the other animals.
>>> In the past, many people used horses as their transportation. This is why I feel so close to horses, not like the other animals.
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