relax and rest
학생이 쓴 원문
1. How do you loosen up?
When I feel upset or embarrassed, I usually take a breathe deeply. maybe many people think breathing deeply is not effective because it is too simple. But I know it is the most effective method to relax.
2. How can you divide your time effectively between work and leisure?
The continuous working is not effective. I should rest sometimes. If I concentrate to study for two hours, I want to rest twenty minutes at least. so If I have a fixed time to spend studying and doing leisure in a day, I should rest at least 10 percent of studying time. If it is a week, I spend 5 days to study and strictly spend 2days to rest.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Brian! You make a good point about the need for rest to maintain productivity. Taking regular breaks, such as resting for 20 minutes after 2 hours of study, is a smart strategy to keep your mind fresh and focused. ^^
~ Teacher Maxine
When I feel upset or embarrassed, I usually take a breathe deeply.
>> When I feel upset or embarrassed, I usually take a deep breath.
maybe many people think breathing deeply is not effective because it is too simple. But I know it is the most effective method to relax.
>> Maybe many people think breathing deeply is not effective because it is too simple, but I know it is the most effective method to relax.
The continuous working is not effective.
>> Continuous working is not effective.
I should rest sometimes.
>> CORRECT
If I concentrate to study for two hours, I want to rest twenty minutes at least.
>> If I concentrate on studying for two hours, I want to rest for at least twenty minutes.
so If I have a fixed time to spend studying and doing leisure in a day, I should rest at least 10 percent of studying time.
>> So, if I have a fixed time to spend studying and doing leisure activities in a day, I should rest for at least 10 percent of the studying time.
If it is a week, I spend 5 days to study and strictly spend 2days to rest.
>> If it is a week, I spend 5 days studying and strictly spend 2 days resting.
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