relaxing vacation
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I went to the Japan with son without guide
My son can speak Japanes
Although it was very short trip we had have good time.
Family trip was good but I liked a with son better.
I can`t enjoy family trip comfortably because I have someone to take care of.
We walked freely without anyone`s interference.
But did he feel same me? He had to guide mom,
Anyway I loved very short flight time and only an hour a half.
Sadly, he said he wanted to go alone next time.
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Here are your corrections:
>> I went to Japan with my son without any guide.
>> Japanese
>> Although it was a very short trip, we had a good time.
>> A family trip is good but I prefer having it with my son.
>> I can`t enjoy a family trip comfortably because I have someone to take care of.
>> We can walk freely without anyone\'s interference.
>> But, I don\'t know if he feels the same way as I am because he had to guide his mom.
>> Anyway, I love it because it was a short flight time. It\'s only an hour and a half.
>> CORRECT
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