Reliability of first impression.
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t really believe my first impression on something since I tend to view things critically from the beginning. By doing so, it becomes possible to prepare for negative consequences that may be caused by something or someone. Moreover, I believe that people can be far more satisfied with an unexpected yet positive outcome from things that they had not so good first impressions than with a foreseeable outcome from what is anticipated to be good. Surprise strongly stirs our emotions. In this regard, when it comes to the reliability of first impression, my first glimpse usually turns out to be wrong, meaning that there are a number of delightful incidents which I don\'t see them happen in the first place. For example, I wasn\'t tempted by numerous ads about wireless earphones, insisting I could stick to the traditional ones without feeling inconveniences. However, ever since I put on a pair of Airpods for the first time, I cannot even imagine going back to earphones with long cables.
강사 첨삭
Hi Drexel! Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. I really appreciate the consistency and effort you put in it! ^^
Yes, first impressions don\'t last so they say and I definitely agree. First impressions could be superficial, general and inaccurate. ^ ^ Just because your first encounter with a person didn\'t suit your standards or your expectations doesn\'t mean that it\'s all going to be that. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>I don\'t really believe in first impressions since I view things critically from the beginning.
By doing so, it becomes possible to prepare for negative consequences that may be caused by something or someone.
>>CORRECT
Moreover, I believe that people can be far more satisfied with an unexpected yet positive outcome from things that they had not so good first impressions than with a foreseeable outcome from what is anticipated to be good.
>>Moreover, I believe that people can be far more satisfied with an unexpected yet positive outcome from things that they had with a not so good first impressions than with a foreseeable outcome from what is anticipated to be good. (too long and wordy, kind of difficult to follow the thought, you can rephrase this one better. )
Surprise strongly stirs our emotions.
>>CORRECT
In this regard, when it comes to the reliability of first impression, my first glimpse usually turns out to be wrong, meaning that there are a number of delightful incidents which I don\'t see them happen in the first place.
>>CORRECT
For example, I wasn\'t tempted by numerous ads about wireless earphones, insisting I could stick to the traditional ones without feeling inconveniences.
>>For example, I wasn\'t tempted by numerous ads about wireless earphones, insisting I could stick to the traditional ones without feeling any inconveniences.
However, ever since I put on a pair of Airpods for the first time, I cannot even imagine going back to earphones with long cables.
>>CORRECT
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