Religion

There are may religion in the world.There are 4popular religion.I am a Christian.When we listen related Christian it makes our feel happy and warm.Christian usually go to church.I go to the church on Sunday.I hate another religion.

Hi [이름]! I am glad you did your homework. It is interesting to know what you think of religion and of other religions different from yours. Keep up the good work! ~T. Kris   Religion >> CORRECT OR: >> My Religion There are may religion in the world. >> There are many religions in the world. There are 4popular religion. >> There are four popular religions. I am a Christian. >>CORRECT When we listen related Christian it makes our feel happy and warm. >> When we listen to other Christians, we feel happy and warm. OR: >> When we talk to our co-Christians, we feel happy. OR: >> Listening to Christian preachings make us happy and contented. Christian usually go to church. >> Christians usually go to church. OR: >> Christians always attend masses in church.  I go to the church on Sunday. >> I go to church on Sundays. OR: >> I go to church every Sunday. I hate another religion. >> CORRECT BETTER: >> I am not interested in other religions. OR: >> I am very satisfied with my religion. OR: >> I dislike other religions.