renovation
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We needed to change the whole iron balustrades of balconies of my house which the bases were rotten. In addition we decided to have the roof and wall mended this time together. We charged Mr. [이름], who is an available man for renovating, to do all of these jobs. He came the day before yesterday with his two assistant workers. They had started to scratch those old paints off and brushed the waterproof chemicals onto the cracks first, and they were waiting for a while until those spots covered with waterproof paint would dry enough up to finishing paint over them. The workers removed all the balustrades to replace with the wooden ones. It is so hot today that I frequently have to provide them with cold beverage and snacks.
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Hi Ms. [Name]!!!
Yes, I heard that it is really warm and humid in Korea right now. So you need to drink a lot of water or increase your water intake to neutralize your body temperature. I think the people who are working at your house renovation are so lucky that you hired them. You are very considerate and kind. I hope you will having a cool weather tomorrow. Take care!!
Lei :-)
We needed to change the whole iron balustrades in the balconies of my house which the bases were rotten.
>>correct
In addition we decided to have the roof and wall mended this time together.
>>correct
We charged Mr. [이름], who is an available man for renovating, to do all of these jobs.
>>correct
He came the day before yesterday with his two assistant workers.
>>correct
They had started to scratch those old paints off and brushed the waterproof chemicals onto the cracks first,
>>they started to scratch those old paints off and brushed the waterproof chemicals onto the cracks first,
and they were waiting for a while until those spots covered with waterproof paint would dry up before finishing paint over them.
>>correct
The workers removed all the balustrades to replace it with the wooden ones.
>>correct
It is so hot today that I frequently have to provide them with cold beverage and snacks.
>>correct
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