renting

2020-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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More than anything, I can save a lot of money. In my case, I have a lot of things that I use a few times after I buy them. Occasionally, things that are kept without use pile up. But if I rent it. I can use it and return it. Of course, rentals are more expensive than lump-sum payments. If I use it only a few times after I buy it, It`s better to rent. We can pay for it these days in Korea when we throw it away. It`s also good for protecting the global environment for the next generation.

강사 첨삭

Good day to you Mrs. [Name]~ Thank you for doing your homework diligently. I highly appreciate it. You did a wonderful job. It\'s almost perfect. Please keep up the good work. See you in class! Have a good day~! -T. Jasper

Here are your corrections:

More than anything, I can save a lot of money.
>> CORRECT

In my case, I have a lot of things that I use a few times after I buy them.
>> CORRECT

Occasionally, things that are kept without use pile up.
>> CORRECT

But if I rent it. I can use it and return it.
>> CORRECT

Of course, rentals are more expensive than lump-sum payments.
>> CORRECT

If I use it only a few times after I buy it, It`s better to rent.
>> CORRECT

We can pay for it these days in Korea when we throw it away.
>> We will pay for it these days in Korea when we throw it away.

It`s also good for protecting the global environment for the next generation.
>> CORRECT

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