Reopen or not
학생이 쓴 원문
It has been almost 2 months since the normal school openning postponed because of the virus.
Now situation \'s getting better, less than 10 domestic confirmed cases, the government is considering to open schools.
Some consist it\'s early to do it as there are still commutity affected infection and since there will be mess gathering among students in a small class, they expect a number of new infected patients.
On the other hands, others argue that for some students ,whom their both parents work out, it\'s considerable to reopen the school.
That\'s why the government decided to reopen schools with no losing points for attendance.
I support their decision.as you see it, there is always pros and cons. And in my opinion this way can fulfill both sides.
So if parents are worried about their children contracting virus, they can care them at home, otheres who cannot stay at home they can send them to school.
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Reopen or not>>To reopen or not.
It has been almost 2 months since the normal school openning postponed because of the virus.
>>It has been almost 2 months since the normal school opening has been postponed because of the virus.
Now situation \'s getting better, less than 10 domestic confirmed cases, the government is considering to open schools.
Now situation \'s getting better, less than 10 domestic confirmed cases, the government is considering to open schools.
>>Now, the situation is getting better because there\'s less than 10 domestic confirmed cases, the government is considering the opening of schools.
Some consist it\'s early to do it as there are still commutity affected infection and since there will be mess gathering among students in a small class, they expect a number of new infected patients.
Some consist it\'s early to do it as there are still commutity affected infection and since there will be mess gathering among students in a small class, they expect a number of new infected patients.
>>Some considered that it\'s still too early to do it as there are still communities that are affected. In which, it will create a mass gathering of students in a class, therefore, a number of new infected patients may occur.
On the other hands, others argue that for some students ,whom their both parents work out, it\'s considerable to reopen the school.
On the other hands, others argue that for some students ,whom their both parents work out, it\'s considerable to reopen the school.
>>On the other hand, others argue that for some students , whose parents both work, it would be a nice consideration to reopen the schools.
That\'s why the government decided to reopen schools with no losing points for attendance.
That\'s why the government decided to reopen schools with no losing points for attendance.
>>That\'s why the government decided to reopen the schools, and at the same time, eliminating the practice of deducting points for absences in the student\'s attendance performance.
I support their decision.as you see it, there is always pros and cons.
I support their decision.as you see it, there is always pros and cons.
>>I support their decision, as you can see, there are always pros and cons in every side of things.
And in my opinion this way can fulfill both sides.
>>And in my opinion, this method fulfills both sides.
So if parents are worried about their children contracting virus, they can care them at home, otheres who cannot stay at home they can send them to school.
So if parents are worried about their children contracting virus, they can care them at home, otheres who cannot stay at home they can send them to school.
>>So if the parents are worried about their children getting infected with the virus, they can take care them at home. While the parents, who are unable to personally look after their children, can send them to school instead.
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