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2014-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Dear my curious Teacher Paula, Good morning and Happy Friday! I checked your comment about my yesterday's writing, and I found that you were puzzled about considering you as a sensible person. For this, what I wanted to say is that you are a person with a sense. I just felt that through our class, and I like your personality. Maybe, here in Korea, this meaning of 'sense' might be used as a different meaning. When we call someone who is humorous or quick-witted, we usually use this word 'sense'. I don't know whether I used this word to you correctly or not, but this is my feeling with my heart, so I think you don't have to be humble. ^^ I am a foreigner who is poor at speaking English, so please understand forgivingly if I use wrong expression. I also try to do my best to convey my meaning exactly. Today, my reply is a little long, and stories should be limited to 1000 words, I can't help to skip my homework for yesterday. See you soon.^^ [이름].

강사 첨삭

Dear my captivating Student [이름],

 

A dazzling evening to you! ^^

T...G...I...F~~~ ^^

 

Hahaha! ^^

I love this day.

 

Ohhh ~~~ ^^

Thank you for satisfying my curiosity! ^.^

I think you used the word correctly.

Therefore, don\'t worry about it.

Don\'t also worry about me being humble.

I am not a humble person anyway. ^^

Thank you also for explaining more about the word \'sense\'. ^^

I like your explanation.

You clearly pointed out the further meaning of the expression.

 

About your homework, it is okay.

I think I already told you that homework is done when you have time.

I don\'t really want to demand about it.

I also don\'t want to pressure you.

But still, thank you for always thinking about your homework.

It proves that you are a responsible student.

You like me.

I like you more! ^^

 

By the way, you made a sound composition.

Very good! ^^

However, don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions below.

 

Anyway, enjoy dating! ^^

See you! ^^ 

 

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

 

 

Dear my curious Teacher Paula,

>> CORRECT!
Good morning and Happy Friday!
>> Good morning and happy Friday! (H in happy should be in small letter.)

I checked your comment about my yesterday\'s writing, and I found that you were puzzled about considering you as a sensible person.
>> CORRECT!

For this, what I wanted to say is that you are a person with a sense.
>> CORRECT!

I just felt that through our class, and I like your personality.
>> CORRECT!

Maybe, here in Korea, this meaning of \'sense\' might be used as a different meaning.
>> CORRECT!

When we call someone who is humorous or quick-witted, we usually use this word \'sense\'.
>> CORRECT!

I don\'t know whether I used this word to you correctly or not, but this is my feeling with my heart, so I think you don\'t have to be humble. ^^ 
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I don\'t know whether I used this word to you correctly or not, but this is what I feel in my heart, so I think you don\'t have to be humble.

I am a foreigner who is poor at speaking English, so please understand forgivingly if I use wrong expression.
>> I am a foreigner who is poor at speaking English, so please understand me forgivingly if I use wrong expressions. (Add ME after UNDERSTAND to complete your sentence.)

I also try to do my best to convey my meaning exactly.
>> CORRECT!

Today, my reply is a little long, and stories should be limited to 1000 words, I can\'t help to skip my homework for yesterday.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Today, my reply is a little long, and stories should be limited to 1000 words, I can\'t help to skip my yesterday\'s homework

See you soon.^^
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: See you!

[이름].

>> [이름]

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