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Dear my captivating Student [이름],
A dazzling evening to you! ^^
T...G...I...F~~~ ^^
Hahaha! ^^
I love this day.
Ohhh ~~~ ^^
Thank you for satisfying my curiosity! ^.^
I think you used the word correctly.
Therefore, don\'t worry about it.
Don\'t also worry about me being humble.
I am not a humble person anyway. ^^
Thank you also for explaining more about the word \'sense\'. ^^
I like your explanation.
You clearly pointed out the further meaning of the expression.
About your homework, it is okay.
I think I already told you that homework is done when you have time.
I don\'t really want to demand about it.
I also don\'t want to pressure you.
But still, thank you for always thinking about your homework.
It proves that you are a responsible student.
You like me.
I like you more! ^^
By the way, you made a sound composition.
Very good! ^^
However, don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions below.
Anyway, enjoy dating! ^^
See you! ^^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear my curious Teacher Paula,
>> CORRECT!
Good morning and Happy Friday!
>> Good morning and happy Friday! (H in happy should be in small letter.)
I checked your comment about my yesterday\'s writing, and I found that you were puzzled about considering you as a sensible person.
>> CORRECT!
For this, what I wanted to say is that you are a person with a sense.
>> CORRECT!
I just felt that through our class, and I like your personality.
>> CORRECT!
Maybe, here in Korea, this meaning of \'sense\' might be used as a different meaning.
>> CORRECT!
When we call someone who is humorous or quick-witted, we usually use this word \'sense\'.
>> CORRECT!
I don\'t know whether I used this word to you correctly or not, but this is my feeling with my heart, so I think you don\'t have to be humble. ^^
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I don\'t know whether I used this word to you correctly or not, but this is what I feel in my heart, so I think you don\'t have to be humble.
I am a foreigner who is poor at speaking English, so please understand forgivingly if I use wrong expression.
>> I am a foreigner who is poor at speaking English, so please understand me forgivingly if I use wrong expressions. (Add ME after UNDERSTAND to complete your sentence.)
I also try to do my best to convey my meaning exactly.
>> CORRECT!
Today, my reply is a little long, and stories should be limited to 1000 words, I can\'t help to skip my homework for yesterday.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Today, my reply is a little long, and stories should be limited to 1000 words, I can\'t help to skip my yesterday\'s homework
See you soon.^^
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: See you!
[이름].
>> [이름]
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