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One of my expectation in this school is that i can interact with various of languages. As you know, i really think that speaking language makes my life quality much more higher. And also when i listen English, or when i speak with English, i feel very comfortable and relaxed. I don\'t know the accurate reason but^^ anyway, when i enter that school i can get more chances to speak English with others. I think that\'s the reason why i think this school will perfectly fits to me!!
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Hello there, Lisa!
I\'m so ecstatic to see you here on the composition page! Finally, you can learn more from your own sentence construction and maximize our learning in English specifically, grammar. So, I think that your organization is great- the introduction was clear, the body was substantial, and the conclusion was solid. I have only very few minute suggestions on how you can fix some parts of your sentences by studying the suggestions I made below.
Follow through and if you have queries about them, please feel free to ask about them in class when I see you next week. Kudos to a job well done on this composition homework answer! Keep it up!
See you soon.^^
-T. Donna =)
>> One of my expectation in this school is that I can interact with (people/ students) of various languages.
As you know, i really think that speaking language makes my life quality much more higher.
>> As you know, I really think that speaking a language makes my life\'s quality much higher.
And also when i listen English, or when i speak with English, i feel very comfortable and relaxed.
>> And also, when I listen to English or when I speak in English, I feel very comfortable and relaxed.
I don\'t know the accurate reason but^^ anyway, when i enter that school i can get more chances to speak English with others.
>> Correct!
Or: I don\'t know the accurate reason but anyway, when I enter that school, I can get more chances to speak English with others.
I think that\'s the reason why i think this school will perfectly fits to me!!
>> I think that\'s the reason why I think this school will perfectly fit to me!
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