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I think the installation of CCTV camera sufficient to protect my properties.
For example when there were no a black box, If we get into the car accident, we can’t prevent contrary from lying. But now we are able to have evidence proved who have more responsibility of that accident. therefore I agree to extend use of CCTV camera.
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I think the installation of CCTV camera sufficient to protect my properties.>> I think the installation of CCTV camera is sufficient to protect my properties.For example when there were no a black box, If we get into the car accident, we can’t prevent contrary from lying.
>> For example without a black box, we can\'t monitor road accidents.
But now we are able to have evidence proved who have more responsibility of that accident.
>> But now we can easily gather an evidence if there is a road accident.
therefore I agree to extend use of CCTV camera.
>> Therefore I agree to extend the use of CCTV cameras.
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