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2018-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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This is admin division report. First, Proceeding to recruitment Contract manger, Mr johnson, We completed mobilization about him. He will arrive here today afternoon. After he going to accomodation, he will come here and greet with our staffs. Design manager, Mr. [Name], Even though we tried to contact through mobile phone, email, He never reply. So we close to his employment any more. Another candidate Mr. [Name], We interviewed 3rd on this week. He requested 7,000USD of salray monthly. So yesterday I requested now and previous company(Samsung)'s payroll, together. Program manager, Mr son, we are negotiating working condtion. he wants to step off every two week's saturday. So, I think that we can suggest, We can give two day's saturday vacation monthly. 1 day will go off as free, and he use annual leave another 1day. additionally, I requested to singapore branch office to find candidate who works in singapore and have experienced of construction.

강사 첨삭

Hi Sir [이름]~! This is your correction for today~! Please check it~! See you!

>>TEACHER GEMMA

This is admin division report.
>>T
his is the admin division report.
First, Proceeding to recruitment.

>>First, proceed to the recruitment.
Contract manger, Mr johnson, We completed mobilization about him.

>>Contract manager, Mr johnson, we have already completed mobilization about him.
He will arrive here today afternoon.

>>He will arrive here this afternoon.

After he going to accomodation,
he will come here and greet with our staffs.

>>After going to the accommodation, he will come here and greet our staff.
Design manager, Mr. [Name], Even though we tried to contact through
mobile phone, email, He never reply.

>>Design manager, Mr. [Name], we tried to contact him through mobile phone and email but he never reply.

So we close to his employment any more.

>>So we closed his employment already.

>>So we closed his appointment already.

Another candidate Mr. [Name], We interviewed 3rd on this week.

>>Another candidate is Mr. [Name]. We interviewed him on the 3rd week.

He requested 7,000USD of salray monthly.

>>He requested 7,000USD monthly salray.

So yesterday I requested now and previous company(Samsung)\'s payroll, together.

>>So yesterday, I requested his latest and previous company(Samsung)\'s payroll, at the same time.

Program manager, Mr son, we are negotiating working condtion.

>>For program manager, Mr. Son, we are still negotiating on his working conditions.

he wants to step off every two week\'s saturday.

>>He wants to take a day off every other Saturday.

So, I think that we can suggest, We can give two day\'s saturday vacation monthly.

>>So, I think, we can suggest to give two Saturdays vacation monthly.

1 day will go off as free, and he use annual leave another 1day.

>> The first Saturday will be a day-off for free, and he can use his annual leave next.
additionally, I requested to singapore branch office to find candidate who works in singapore and have experienced of construction

>>In addition, I requested to Singapore branch office to find a candidate who works in Singapore who has an experience in construction.

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