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>>TEACHER GEMMA
This is admin division report.
>>This is the admin division report.
First, Proceeding to recruitment.
>>First, proceed to the recruitment.
Contract manger, Mr johnson, We completed mobilization about him.
>>Contract manager, Mr johnson, we have already completed mobilization about him.
He will arrive here today afternoon.
>>He will arrive here this afternoon.
After he going to accomodation,
he will come here and greet with our staffs.
>>After going to the accommodation, he will come here and greet our staff.
Design manager, Mr. [Name], Even though we tried to contact through
mobile phone, email, He never reply.
>>Design manager, Mr. [Name], we tried to contact him through mobile phone and email but he never reply.
So we close to his employment any more.
>>So we closed his employment already.
>>So we closed his appointment already.
Another candidate Mr. [Name], We interviewed 3rd on this week.
>>Another candidate is Mr. [Name]. We interviewed him on the 3rd week.
He requested 7,000USD of salray monthly.
>>He requested 7,000USD monthly salray.
So yesterday I requested now and previous company(Samsung)\'s payroll, together.
>>So yesterday, I requested his latest and previous company(Samsung)\'s payroll, at the same time.
Program manager, Mr son, we are negotiating working condtion.
>>For program manager, Mr. Son, we are still negotiating on his working conditions.
he wants to step off every two week\'s saturday.
>>He wants to take a day off every other Saturday.
So, I think that we can suggest, We can give two day\'s saturday vacation monthly.
>>So, I think, we can suggest to give two Saturdays vacation monthly.
1 day will go off as free, and he use annual leave another 1day.
>> The first Saturday will be a day-off for free, and he can use his annual leave next.
additionally, I requested to singapore branch office to find candidate who works in singapore and have experienced of construction
>>In addition, I requested to Singapore branch office to find a candidate who works in Singapore who has an experience in construction.
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