Req 6
학생이 쓴 원문
Tell me about your house.
How do you get there from your office?
It takes about 10 minutes by car to go home from work.
First I turn off the PC in my office on the 4th floor of the company building and go to the elevator.
After going down through it, I get out of the building and go to the exit gate.
After going through the security with metal detector, I go to the parking lot and get on the car.
Starting the engine, I turn right at the exit of the parking place. Then I turn left at the first intersection and turn right at the next intersection. The length of the road is about 500meters until now.
I turn left at the last intersection which is 3km far and I go into my apartment.
After going down to parking area in the basement of the building, I park the car. Getting off the car, I go up to my place through the elevator.
My place is on the 7thfloor. Before pressing the button, I can hear the bark of the pet dog Happy.
강사 첨삭
Tell me about your house.
How do you get there from your office?
It takes about 10 minutes by car to go home from work.
>>> correct!^^
First I turn off the PC in my office on the 4th floor of the company building and go to the elevator.
>>> correct!^^
After going down through it, I get out of the building and go to the exit gate.
>>> correct!^^
After going through the security with metal detector, I go to the parking lot and get on the car.
>>> After going through the security with metal detector, I go to the parking lot and get into the car.
Starting the engine, I turn right at the exit of the parking place.
>>> After starting my engine I drive and turn right towards the exit of the parking place.
Then I turn left at the first intersection and turn right at the next intersection.
>>> correct!^^
The length of the road is about 500meters until now.
>>> The length of the is about 500 meters from then on.
I turn left at the last intersection which is 3km far and I go into my apartment.
>>> I turn left at the last intersection which is 3km far and I go to my apartment building.
After going down to parking area in the basement of the building, I park the car.
>>> After going down the parking area in the basement of the building, I park my car.
Getting off the car, I go up to my place through the elevator.
>>> After getting out of my car, I go up to my place through the elevator.
My place is on the 7thfloor. Before pressing the button, I can hear the bark of the pet dog Happy.
>>> correct!^^ ( You can say... I can hear the bark of our pet dog named Happy.)
How do you get there from your office?
It takes about 10 minutes by car to go home from work.
>>> correct!^^
First I turn off the PC in my office on the 4th floor of the company building and go to the elevator.
>>> correct!^^
After going down through it, I get out of the building and go to the exit gate.
>>> correct!^^
After going through the security with metal detector, I go to the parking lot and get on the car.
>>> After going through the security with metal detector, I go to the parking lot and get into the car.
Starting the engine, I turn right at the exit of the parking place.
>>> After starting my engine I drive and turn right towards the exit of the parking place.
Then I turn left at the first intersection and turn right at the next intersection.
>>> correct!^^
The length of the road is about 500meters until now.
>>> The length of the is about 500 meters from then on.
I turn left at the last intersection which is 3km far and I go into my apartment.
>>> I turn left at the last intersection which is 3km far and I go to my apartment building.
After going down to parking area in the basement of the building, I park the car.
>>> After going down the parking area in the basement of the building, I park my car.
Getting off the car, I go up to my place through the elevator.
>>> After getting out of my car, I go up to my place through the elevator.
My place is on the 7thfloor. Before pressing the button, I can hear the bark of the pet dog Happy.
>>> correct!^^ ( You can say... I can hear the bark of our pet dog named Happy.)
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