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학생이 쓴 원문
I get to work at 8 in the morning.The first thing that I do in my seat is to check out my email.After that, I follow up the work to have to do through the email.I prioritize today’s work, make a to-do-list, and take care of this during whole day.I often talk about the project with my fellows having a cup of coffee.
After lunch at 11:40, I’m studying English before lunch time is over.
I usually have a meeting in the after noon.Finally I wrap up my paperwork to report to my boss before I get off work at 5 PM on average.
On some weekends, I watch TV about baseball and billiards.
After lunch I go to the sauna at the center of my complex.
After that I play billiards at a place nearby.
Getting to home, I study English and reading a book in English.
Also, There’s an important thing to do. I have to wash my pet dog Happy and his pad.On the other weekends, I often go out for lunch with my family. We have a great time to eat delicious foods andafterwards go shopping.
강사 첨삭
I get to work at 8 in the morning.
>>> I go to work at 8 in the morning.
The first thing that I do in my seat is to check out my email.
>>> The first thing that I do once I sit down is to check out my e-mail.
After that, I follow up the work to have to do through the email.
>>> After that, I follow up the work that I have to do through e-mail.
I prioritize today’s work, make a to-do-list, and take care of this during whole day.I often talk about the project with my fellows having a cup of coffee.
>>> I prioritize today\'s work. make a to-do-list and take care of this for the whole day. I often talk about the project with my co-workers while having a cup of coffee.
After lunch at 11:40, I’m studying English before lunch time is over.
>>> After lunch at around 11:40, I study English before my lunch break is over.
I usually have a meeting in the after noon.Finally I wrap up my paperwork to report to my boss before I get off work at 5 PM on average.
>>> correct!^^. Finally I wrap up all my paper works to report them to my boss before I get off work at usually around 5pm.
On some weekends, I watch TV about baseball and billiards.
>>> correct!^^
After lunch I go to the sauna at the center of my complex. After that I play billiards at a place nearby.
>>> correct!^^
Getting to home, I study English and reading a book in English.
>>> When I get home, I study English and read English books.
Also, There’s an important thing to do. I have to wash my pet dog Happy and his pad.
>>> correct!^^
On the other weekends, I often go out for lunch with my family. We have a great time to eat delicious foods and afterwards go shopping.\\
>>> During other weekends,...
>>> I go to work at 8 in the morning.
The first thing that I do in my seat is to check out my email.
>>> The first thing that I do once I sit down is to check out my e-mail.
After that, I follow up the work to have to do through the email.
>>> After that, I follow up the work that I have to do through e-mail.
I prioritize today’s work, make a to-do-list, and take care of this during whole day.I often talk about the project with my fellows having a cup of coffee.
>>> I prioritize today\'s work. make a to-do-list and take care of this for the whole day. I often talk about the project with my co-workers while having a cup of coffee.
After lunch at 11:40, I’m studying English before lunch time is over.
>>> After lunch at around 11:40, I study English before my lunch break is over.
I usually have a meeting in the after noon.Finally I wrap up my paperwork to report to my boss before I get off work at 5 PM on average.
>>> correct!^^. Finally I wrap up all my paper works to report them to my boss before I get off work at usually around 5pm.
On some weekends, I watch TV about baseball and billiards.
>>> correct!^^
After lunch I go to the sauna at the center of my complex. After that I play billiards at a place nearby.
>>> correct!^^
Getting to home, I study English and reading a book in English.
>>> When I get home, I study English and read English books.
Also, There’s an important thing to do. I have to wash my pet dog Happy and his pad.
>>> correct!^^
On the other weekends, I often go out for lunch with my family. We have a great time to eat delicious foods and afterwards go shopping.\\
>>> During other weekends,...
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