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Tell me about your favorite movie
My favorite movie is Jerry Mcguire, Tom cruise and Rene Zellwieger starring.
It is the film about a sports agent that experiences the real love and friendship.
My memorable scene is that Tom and his only customer, black football guy are hugging around the media and reporters in the locker room after winning in the Super bowl game. The player said crying, “Jerry we did it, we did it”. I felt what the real friendship is. Jerry was a successful agent but he always felt the vanity that something is missing. He wanted less client and more attention.
Finally he was fired and lost many clients at the same time.
But he gained only one promising black player in Arizona. He supported and took care of him. Finally they made it. The hugging scene showed everything suffered between them.
It often reminds me of the old days.
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Mr. [이름]!^^ I also like that movie. I like the scene when they were in the bathroom and Tom said: show me the money!kkk
Teacher Reina *.*
Tell me about your favorite movie
My favorite movie is Jerry Mcguire, Tom cruise and Rene Zellwieger starring.
>>> My favorite movie is Jerry Mcguire starring Tom Cruise and Rene Zellwieger.
It is the film about a sports agent that experiences the real love and friendship.
>>> correct!^^
My memorable scene is that Tom and his only customer, black football guy are hugging around the media and reporters in the locker room after winning in the Super bowl game.
>>> The most memorable scene in the movie is when Tom and his only client; the black football player are hugging in the locker room and ssurrounding them are reporters and media people.
The player said crying, “Jerry we did it, we did it”.
>>> The player was crying while saying: Jerry we did it, we did it!^^
I felt what the real friendship is.
>>> I felt the true meaning of friendship.
Jerry was a successful agent but he always felt the vanity that something is missing.
>>> correct!^^
He wanted less client and more attention.
>>> He wanted less clients and pay more attention to them.
Finally he was fired and lost many clients at the same time.
>>> correct!^^
But he gained only one promising black player in Arizona. He supported and took care of him. Finally they made it.
>>> correct!^^
The hugging scene showed everything suffered between them.
>>> The hugging scene showed all their sufferings that happened to them.
It often reminds me of the old days.
>>> corect!^^
Teacher Reina *.*
Tell me about your favorite movie
My favorite movie is Jerry Mcguire, Tom cruise and Rene Zellwieger starring.
>>> My favorite movie is Jerry Mcguire starring Tom Cruise and Rene Zellwieger.
It is the film about a sports agent that experiences the real love and friendship.
>>> correct!^^
My memorable scene is that Tom and his only customer, black football guy are hugging around the media and reporters in the locker room after winning in the Super bowl game.
>>> The most memorable scene in the movie is when Tom and his only client; the black football player are hugging in the locker room and ssurrounding them are reporters and media people.
The player said crying, “Jerry we did it, we did it”.
>>> The player was crying while saying: Jerry we did it, we did it!^^
I felt what the real friendship is.
>>> I felt the true meaning of friendship.
Jerry was a successful agent but he always felt the vanity that something is missing.
>>> correct!^^
He wanted less client and more attention.
>>> He wanted less clients and pay more attention to them.
Finally he was fired and lost many clients at the same time.
>>> correct!^^
But he gained only one promising black player in Arizona. He supported and took care of him. Finally they made it.
>>> correct!^^
The hugging scene showed everything suffered between them.
>>> The hugging scene showed all their sufferings that happened to them.
It often reminds me of the old days.
>>> corect!^^
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