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Describe your bedroom.
My bedroom isn’t that big wide. The color of the wall is beige.
There is a queen-sized bed in the middle of the room.
There are three pillows and bed cloth on the bed.
On the right side of that, A stand is on the small table.
On the left side, A white closet is.
TV and makeup table is in front of the bed.
A portrait is hanging behind the bed.
A fluorescent light bulb is on the ceiling.
I spend more than 12hours in the bedroom wathcing TV, Reading and sleeping.
Describe your neighborhood
I'm living in an apartment complex that is located in Asan where is 100km far to the south of Seoul.
My place is very close to my company. It takes 10min to get there by car.
I have been living for over 5 years.
There is also a park and small lake where I can refresh.
This is very quiet and has a fresh air.
I love this place. It will be my second hometown because my son and daughter is growing up here.
As time goes by, Many people are coming in around my area. Now there are so many bars and restaurants to have a great vibe here.
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Describe your bedroom.
My bedroom isn’t that big wide.
>>> My bedroom isn\'t that big/wide.
The color of the wall is beige.There is a queen-sized bed in the middle of the room.
>>> correct!^^
There are three pillows and bed cloth on the bed.
>>> There are three pillows and a bed cloth on the bed.
On the right side of that, A stand is on the small table.
>>> On the right side, a stand is on a small table.
On the left side, A white closet is.
>>> On the left side, there\'s a white closet.
TV and makeup table is in front of the bed.
>>> A TV and a make-up table is in front of the bed.
A portrait is hanging behind the bed.
>>> A portrait is hanging on a wall behind the bed.
A fluorescent light bulb is on the ceiling.
>>> correct!^^
I spend more than 12hours in the bedroom watching TV, reading and sleeping.
>>> correct!^^
Describe your neighborhood
I\'m living in an apartment complex that is located in Asan where is 100km far to the south of Seoul.
>>> I\'m living in an apartment complex which is located in Ansan; 100 km from Seoul towards the south.
My place is very close to my company. It takes 10min to get there by car.
>>> correct!^^
I have been living for over 5 years.
>>> I have been living here for over five years now.
There is also a park and small lake where I can refresh.
>>> correct!^^
This is very quiet and has a fresh air.
>>> It is very quiet and has fresh air.
I love this place. It will be my second hometown because my son and daughter is growing up here.
>>> correct!^^
As time goes by, many people are coming in around my area. Now there are so many bars and restaurants to have a great vibe here.
>>> correct!^^
My bedroom isn’t that big wide.
>>> My bedroom isn\'t that big/wide.
The color of the wall is beige.There is a queen-sized bed in the middle of the room.
>>> correct!^^
There are three pillows and bed cloth on the bed.
>>> There are three pillows and a bed cloth on the bed.
On the right side of that, A stand is on the small table.
>>> On the right side, a stand is on a small table.
On the left side, A white closet is.
>>> On the left side, there\'s a white closet.
TV and makeup table is in front of the bed.
>>> A TV and a make-up table is in front of the bed.
A portrait is hanging behind the bed.
>>> A portrait is hanging on a wall behind the bed.
A fluorescent light bulb is on the ceiling.
>>> correct!^^
I spend more than 12hours in the bedroom watching TV, reading and sleeping.
>>> correct!^^
Describe your neighborhood
I\'m living in an apartment complex that is located in Asan where is 100km far to the south of Seoul.
>>> I\'m living in an apartment complex which is located in Ansan; 100 km from Seoul towards the south.
My place is very close to my company. It takes 10min to get there by car.
>>> correct!^^
I have been living for over 5 years.
>>> I have been living here for over five years now.
There is also a park and small lake where I can refresh.
>>> correct!^^
This is very quiet and has a fresh air.
>>> It is very quiet and has fresh air.
I love this place. It will be my second hometown because my son and daughter is growing up here.
>>> correct!^^
As time goes by, many people are coming in around my area. Now there are so many bars and restaurants to have a great vibe here.
>>> correct!^^
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