Request for OPIc

Hello [이름]!

I hope this would help you. Practice it as much as you can but try your best not be sound scripted during the test. You were great. Keep it up!

~Teacher Eunice

I got a homework, but I have a OPIc test on early January.

>> I got homework, but I will be having an OPIc test on this January.  

If you dont mind, please check the paragraph I am going to memorize.
>> Correct!
1. an Introduction

>> Introduction
 My name is jong[이름] kim.

>> My name is [Name][이름] Kim.

>> OR: I am Jong[이름] Kim.

I turned 27 years old just last month in international age and 29 years old in korean age.

>> I turned 27 years old last month internationally but I\'m 29 years old in Korean age.  

Being 29 years old make me nervous, since the age is the alst age in twenties.

>> Being a 29 year old makes me feel nervous, since it is the final age for twenties people.

So, I am dong my best to look for a job related to my major.

>>  So, I am doing my best to look for a job that is related to my major.

My major in unversity is Statistics.

>> I majored Statistics in the university.

>> OR: I studied Statistics in the university.
Theseday I live in a house in seoul with my aunt.

>> These days, I am living in an apartment in Seoul with my aunt.

I have a lot of hobbies.

>> Correct!

My hobbies thesedays include reading a book, writing a novel.

>> My hobbies these days include reading a book and writing a novel.  

These are good ways to reflect myself. while I reading a book and writing a novel, I can look back myself compared with the characters. 

>> These are good ways to have a self-reflection while I reading a book and writing a novel, I can look back, reflect and compare my character from the past. 

And I have dreamed to be a novelist writing a stroy about my life.

>> I dream to be a novelist, writing a story about my life. 

So, Not only looking for a job, I am but also preparing to submit my noverl to publishing company.
>>  I am not only looking for a job, but I am also preparing to submit my novel into a publishing company.
2. Where you live

>> Correct!

>> OR: Where do you live?
 I will submit the paragraph at the next time!

>>  I will submit the paragraph next time.