Request for OPIc test.
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Hello [이름]!
Way to go! We also have something in common. I also live in the bustle city where people used to be in an errand all the time. Let\'s not be affected by that kind of environment. We can still maintain our inner peace! Have a great weekend!
~Teacher Eunice
The paragraph you will read is about my neighborhood.
>> Correct!
At present, I am living in the corner of noisy neighborhood near an university.
>> At present, I am living in the corner of a noisy neighborhood near the university.
It is quite similar to the neighborhood I had lived in.
>> It is quite similar to the neighborhood where I had lived.
The neighborhood I had live i is located in front of university.
>> The neighborhood I had lived was located in front of the university.
That is why there many students who make a noise around that neighborhood.
>> That is why there were many students who made noise around the neighborhood.
Likewise, the neighborhood I am living in is also noisy.
>> Likewise, the neighborhood where I am living in now is also noisy.
However, It has good transportation as noisy as the neighbor is.
>> However, but transportation system is as noisy as the neighbor.
And ther are a lot of stores like restourants, pubs and so on.
>> There are a lot of stores like restaurants, pubs and so on.
Many places located in my place are decorated as a fancy and selling in cheap price for younsters.
>> Many places are decorated in a very fancy way, they are also selling cheap vouchers.
>> There are many fancy places in my country which sells affordable vouchers.
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