Request information about 'Kenaf'
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Hi! [이름]. Happy Friday to you :)
I must I\'m so impress by how you construct your own sentences to best express your self but allow me to give you some suggestion.
However keep up the good work specially with your sentences patterns and vocabulary I\'ll see you in class have a great weekend.
~~~Teacher Regine ^_^
Hope everything goes well for you.
>> I hope everything is great with you.
My name is [Name] [이름] working at Daewon Chemical where manufactures plastic compounding such as PP, PE and ABS, Etc in South Korea.
>> My name is [Name] [이름] I\'m working at Daewon Chemical that manufactures plastic compounding such as PP, PE and ABS, Etc in South Korea.
anyway nice to contact you.
>> I must it\'s an honor to with you.
Regarding to your product \'Kenaf\', I\'m so interesting Kenaf with our compounding materials and nowadays we are looking for the materials like economic, environmental and society benefits that deal with Kenaf materials from your side.
>> Regarding your product \'Kenaf\', I am interested on your company\'s offer especially that nowadays, we are looking for an economical and environmental substance which also benefits the society and made from Kenaf materials.
Related to our needs, I would like to develop PP+Kenaf materials that is a lot of advantages which are decreasing costs, much stronger and more competitive.
>>Related to our needs, I would like to develop a PP+Kenaf material that have a lot of advantages such as low cost, stronger and more competitive.
So if you don\'t mind, could you let me know your information in detail as below.
>> So if you don\'t mind, kindly let us know about some information in details listed below:
1. I think your office is in Germany and Factory in Israel isn\'t it? it means Kenaf is being cultivated in Israel?
>> 1. I think your main office is in Germany but your factory is located in Israel am I correct? so doesn\'t mean that Kenaf is being cultivated in Israel?
2. What form of Kenaf you have made in the factory such as chop, powder and granules? our best option is choppy type.
>> 2. May I know what form of Kenaf are you making in the factory is it chop, powder or granules? .Because we preferred the choppy type of Kenaf.
3. Could you provide me with Kenaf samples for development?
>> 3. Could you provide us a sample of Kenaf it\'s for our development proposes.
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