Resom Resort
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The location and facilities are superior to those of other resorts. And most of the rooms are members-only, just small percentage of rooms are open to non-members. One more thing, they always provide clean facilities including rooms because of frequent renovation.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I see! So Resom Resort can’t be accessed by just anyone because it’s mostly for members, making it more exclusive. I think this helps maintain the quality of the resort and makes it seem more luxurious to those who can’t afford it.
- T. Caitlyn
The location and facilities are superior to those of other resorts.
>> CORRECT
And most of the rooms are members-only, just small percentage of rooms are open to non-members.
>> Most of the rooms are for members only; only a small percentage of rooms are open to non-members.
One more thing, they always provide clean facilities including rooms because of frequent renovation.
>> One more thing: they always provide clean facilities, including rooms, thanks to frequent renovations.
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