Respect My Parents
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] How do you show respect to your parents? Give examples.
I usally write letters to my parents.
In my letters, I usally write like \'You are the best parents in the wrold.\' or \'I love you. I respect you.\'.
I\'m trying to express more respecting feeling to my parents.
I usally write letters to show respecting feeling to my parents!
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your composition, Clair!
Catch you on Wednesday!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] How do you show respect to your parents? Give examples.
I usally write letters to my parents.
>> I usually write letters to my parents. [Note the spelling of the word \"usually\".]
In my letters, I usally write like \'You are the best parents in the wrold.\' or \'I love you. I respect you.\'.
>> In my letters, I usually write things like, \'You are the best parents in the world.\' or \'I love you. I respect you.\' [Note the spelling of the word \"world\".]
I\'m trying to express more respecting feeling to my parents.
>> I\'m trying to express more my respect to my parents.
I usally write letters to show respecting feeling to my parents!
>> I mostly write letters to show my feelings of respect to them.
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