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Ifeel comfortable mind when I heard this ward 'silence' because I more like quiet circumstance than loud condition.
However, heavy silence is not so good for team meeting. Some members are attending with no opinioin in the meeting. So I recommmend them to posivive talking for effective meeting.
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Hello, YD!
Happy Tuesday! ^_^
Good job! You did well though I\'ve made some modifications to your sentences to make the \'thought\' or \'idea\' clearer.
Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
I\'ll look forward to more interesting compositions from you.
See you later! :)
_T. Mayleen
Ifeel comfortable mind when I heard this ward \'silence\' because I more like quiet circumstance than loud condition.
>> The word \'silence\' makes me feel comfortable because I like quiet circumstances more than loud conditions.However, heavy silence is not so good for team meeting.
>> However, heavy silence is not so good for a team meeting.
Some members are attending with no opinioin in the meeting.
>> Some members only come for attendance without sharing their opinions.
So I recommmend them to posivive talking for effective meeting. >> So I recommend them to voice out their thoughts for an effective meeting.
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