Response to my teacher's comment. ^^

Being a student is quite good experiece for me too. Everyone has diffrent life's experience and having to talk with them to learn their ideas especially learning English is one of the most exciting thing in my life. Because, It makes me to know you and sharing my stories with diffrent countries people. I think life is adventure. We don't know what is going on next time, so we should enjoy our life at every moment. My mom told me that you should be brave and pride of yourslef, but don't be arrogant and the most important ting is in life is to enjoy yourself. I have an important presentation in company tomorrow. It is going to be challenge myself. Cheer up everyone and hit the world. See you on Monday [이름]

Hello there!

It\'s Monday once again!

Thank you for this composition. I enjoyed reading it. ^^

Here are the corrections I made for your sentences.

See you later! :)

--- Teacher Wendy ^^ ----

Being a student is quite good experiece for me too.

>> Being a student is quite a good experience for me, too.
Everyone has diffrent life\'s experience and having to talk with them to learn their ideas especially learning English is one of the most exciting thing in my life.

>> Everyone has different life experiences and having to talk with them to learn their ideas especially learning English is one of the most exciting thing in my life.

Because, It makes me to know you and sharing my stories with diffrent countries people.

>> Because it lets me know them more and share my stories to different people from other countries.
I think life is adventure.

>> I think life is an adventure.

OR>> I think life is full of adventures.

We don\'t know what is going on next time, so we should enjoy our life at every moment.
>> We don\'t know what is going on next time so we should enjoy every moment of our lives.
My mom told me that you should be brave and pride of yourslef, but don\'t be arrogant and the most important ting is in life is to enjoy yourself.
>> My mom told me that I should be brave and proud of myself but not to be arrogant and the most important thing in life is to enjoy yourself.
I have an important presentation in company tomorrow.

>> I have an important presentation in the company tomorrow.

It is going to be challenge myself.

>> It is going to be a challenge for myself.

Cheer up everyone and hit the world.

>> Correct.
See you on Monday

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>> Correct.