responsibilities of a mother are the same as the responsibilities of a father to their families

Wow!

If that woman can do all of those stuffs, yes she is a Super Woman. ^_^

It is really important that we should be flexible always.

These days, men and women are equal.
There are countries who hire women as welders, right?

It is really important that a family lives a comfortable life.

Anyway, this topic is really interesting. Maybe we can talk more about this in class.
Thanks for a superb composition. I enjoyed reading it.

Teacher Nina

Korean society is still way different from other western countries in terms of roles and responsibilities of women.

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>> OR: There is still a big difference between Korea and other Western countries in terms of women\'s role and responsibilities.

Korea is largely and deeply rooted in Confucianism.

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>> OR: Korea is really rooted in Confucianism.

Confucian ideas, philosophy and cultures prevail in every aspect of our life.

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In a Confucian society, The Sky was the Man and the Earth the Woman.

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>> In a Confucian society, the sky is the man and the Earth is the woman.

Men take the primary responsibility to support his/her family financially and women take care of housework and raise children. \\

>> Men take the primary responsibility to support his family financially and women take care of the housework and raise children.

The similar thought still exists in a modern society.

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>> Similar thought still exists nowadays.

A Korean mother typically devotes all of her time and energy to raising and educating their children, and doing housework like cleaning and doing dishes.

>> A Korean mother typically devotes all of her time and energy in raising, educating their children, doing housework like cleaning and doing the dishes.

Men should work outside to earn money.

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However, due to the difficult economic situations these days, most men strongly hope their wives to work as well because it is not easy for family to survive with a single-income.

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There is a term called Super Woman in Korea, who has a decent job, makes lots of money, educates her children well, and do housework.

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