Responsible
학생이 쓴 원문
If someone who is not responsible has a certain authority, it will cause the disaster. It doesn’t only involve trivial events, but also global events.
In university, most students have some experiences through the team projects. There are many students who didn’t complete what they should do in this team. They think that someone will do what they have to do. Because they are not responsible, other team members are struggling to do more tasks.
Also, for example, we can see someone who doesn’t have a certain responsibility makes a disaster. We remember the accident which was happened in 2014. 세월ship is caused by only one person, the captain. He escaped without announcing to the passenger. He should protect all the passengers in his ship, because that is the responsibility which captain must have.
In wide view, we acknowledge what superpowers made in their industrial revolution.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. You are right. A lack of responsibility can cause great disaster. (With great power, comes great responsibility.)
- T. Beth
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If someone who is not responsible has a certain authority, it will cause the disaster. >>> correct
It doesn’t only involve trivial events, but also global events.
>>> correct
In university, most students have some experiences through the team projects.
In university, most students have some experiences through the team projects.
>>> OR: In the university, most students go through experiences on team projects.
There are many students who didn’t complete what they should do in this team.
>>> correct
They think that someone will do what they have to do.
>>> correct
Because they are not responsible, other team members are struggling to do more tasks.
>>> correct
Also, for example, we can see someone who doesn’t have a certain responsibility makes a disaster.
Also, for example, we can see someone who doesn’t have a certain responsibility makes a disaster.
>>> OR: In addition, for example, we can see someone who lacks the sense of responsibility cause a disaster.
We remember the accident which was happened in 2014.
>>> We remember the accident which happened in 2014.
세월ship is caused by only one person, the captain.
>>> The Sewol Ship incident was cause by only one person, the captain.
He escaped without announcing to the passenger.
>>> correct
He should protect all the passengers in his ship, because that is the responsibility which captain must have.
>>> He should have protected all the passengers in his ship, because that is the responsibility the captain must have.
In wide view, we acknowledge what superpowers made in their industrial revolution.
>>> OR: In a wider perspective, we acknowledge what superpowers made in their industrial revolution.
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