Rest day.
학생이 쓴 원문
Today is Sunday. It\'s weekend.
It\'s wind and cloud.
Last night, Juhee came to my home. because we drunk wine.
She arrived at 6:00. and She leaved at 11:15.
We play long time.
We were talking about our children, husband, parents, parents in low...
We had a lot.
So, today is very tired.
I and My children rested.
At 4:00 We leaved home. because My son(hajun) had a baseball game.
His team losed.
And today restart power English.
I need studing English.
I have to studing English.!!!!!
I will study hard!!!!
fighting!!!
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름] [이름]! ^^,)
Thank you so much for this composition.
I\'ve read it well, and I have made some modifications.
I will call you later at 22:00 for our first class. I hope you\'ll accept the Zoom invite soon!^^
I hope you\'re having a good day.
See you later!
__T. Mayleen :)
Today is Sunday. It\'s weekend.
It\'s wind and cloud.
>>> Today is Sunday. It\'s the weekend.
It\'s wind and cloud.
>>> Today is Sunday. It\'s the weekend.
It\'s windy and cloudy.
Last night, Juhee came to my home. because we drunk wine.
She arrived at 6:00. and She leaved at 11:15.
We play long time.
We were talking about our children, husband, parents, parents in low...
We had a lot.
So, today is very tired.
I and My children rested.
>>> Last night, Juhee came to my home, and we drank wine.
She arrived at 6:00. and She leaved at 11:15.
We play long time.
We were talking about our children, husband, parents, parents in low...
We had a lot.
So, today is very tired.
I and My children rested.
>>> Last night, Juhee came to my home, and we drank wine.
She arrived at 6:00 in the evening and left at 11:15 p.m.
We played for a long time. We talked about our children, husbands, parents, and parents-in-law.
We had a lot, so it was very tiring.
After that, my children and I rested.
At 4:00 We leaved home. because My son(hajun) had a baseball game.
His team losed.
>>> At 4:00 we left home. because my son, Hajun, had a baseball game.
And today restart power English.
>>> And today, I will restart with Power English.
His team lost.
And today restart power English.
>>> And today, I will restart with Power English.
I need studing English. I have to studing English.!!!!!
>>> I need to study English. I have to study English!
I will study hard!!!! fighting!!!
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: I will study hard. Fighting!
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