Rest for life
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Why do you think sleep or proper rest is important?
I think sleep or proper rest is the important factor to live constantly. We can move and breathe by our body, so maintaining body healthier is the fundamental work to live. Many people work and exercise, and sleep or proper rest is as important as exercise. We should give energy to our body and that energy is filled up by sleep, rest, foods and so on. I think sleep or proper rest is very important to live long.
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I think sleep or proper rest is the important factor to live constantly.
>> CORRECT.
We can move and breathe by our body, so maintaining body healthier is the fundamental work to live.
>> We can move and breathe with our body, so maintaining a healthier body is a fundamental work to live.
Many people work and exercise, and sleep or proper rest is as important as exercise.
>> CORRECT.
We should give energy to our body and that energy is filled up by sleep, rest, foods and so on.
>> CORRECT.
I think sleep or proper rest is very important to live long.
>> CORRECT.
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