Restaurant
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1. My favorite restaurant is located in my town.
>> Correct.
It takes about 10 minutes by bus to get there.
>> Correct.
There all menus are my favorite things like salmon and meat kind of rice so it is hard to choose menus.
>> On the menu, my favorite would be salmon, different kinds of meat, and rice. It is really hard to choose one from the menu.
Whenever I go there I eat different dishes to feel various taste.
>> Whenever I go there, I eat different dishes to have experience of various tastes.
2. The restaurant atmosphere is not so quiet but energetic.
>> The restaurant\'s atmosphere is not so quiet but energetic.
One good thing is through large and long glass window we can see the view.
>> One good thing about the restaurant is through the large and long glass window where we can see a really good view.
Also, since service speed is fast I can eat right away when I am hungry.
>> Also, since the service fast, I can eat right away when I am hungry.
3. My favorite food is beef steak rice.
>> Correct.
I like salmon too but I\'ve never tried the salmon rice.
>> I like salmon too but I\'ve never tried salmon rice before.
The spice is well matched with menu so other side dishes are not necessary.
>> The spice is well-matched with the menu so other side dishes are not necessary.
Plus, folk rice and salmon rice are the best foods of restaurant.
>> Plus, pork rice, and salmon rice are the best food in the restaurant for me.
4. I want to tell you about Kimchi and Bulgogi.
>> Correct.
Because of Kimchi’s spice, we can relieve our taste when we eat something that oily and unpleasant food.
>> Because of the Kimchi’s spice, we can wash our palate when we eat something that is oily.
So I eat Kimchi almost everyday.
>> So I eat Kimchi almost every day.
In addition, Bulgogi is also really famous food because it is made with beef or folk.
>> In addition, Bulgogi is also a really famous dish because it is made with beef or pork.
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