Restaurant

2019-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

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1. My favorite restaurant is located in my town. It takes about 10 minutes by bus to get there. There all menus are my favorite things like salmon and meat kind of rice so it is hard to choose menus. Whenever I go there I eat different dishes to feel various taste. 2. The restaurant atmosphere is not so quiet but energetic. One good thing is through large and long glass window we can see the view. Also, since service speed is fast I can eat right away when I am hungry. 3. My favorite food is beef steak rice. I like salmon too but I\'ve never tried the salmon rice. The spice is well matched with menu so other side dishes are not necessary. Plus, folk rice and salmon rice are the best foods of restaurant. 4. I want to tell you about Kimchi and Bulgogi. Because of Kimchi’s spice, we can relieve our taste when we eat something that oily and unpleasant food. So I eat Kimchi almost everyday. In addition, Bulgogi is also really famous food because it is made with beef or folk.

강사 첨삭

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1. My favorite restaurant is located in my town.

>> Correct.


 It takes about 10 minutes by bus to get there.

>> Correct.


There all menus are my favorite things like salmon and meat kind of rice so it is hard to choose menus.

>> On the menu, my favorite would be salmon, different kinds of meat, and rice. It is really hard to choose one from the menu.


Whenever I go there I eat different dishes to feel various taste.

>> Whenever I go there, I eat different dishes to have experience of various tastes.



 2. The restaurant atmosphere is not so quiet but energetic.

>> The restaurant\'s atmosphere is not so quiet but energetic.


 One good thing is through large and long glass window we can see the view.

>>  One good thing about the restaurant is through the large and long glass window where we can see a really good view.


Also, since service speed is fast I can eat right away when I am hungry.

>> Also, since the service fast, I can eat right away when I am hungry.



 3. My favorite food is beef steak rice.

>> Correct.


 I like salmon too but I\'ve never tried the salmon rice.

>>  I like salmon too but I\'ve never tried salmon rice before.


The spice is well matched with menu so other side dishes are not necessary.

>> The spice is well-matched with the menu so other side dishes are not necessary.


Plus, folk rice and salmon rice are the best foods of restaurant. 

>> Plus, pork rice, and salmon rice are the best food in the restaurant for me. 


4. I want to tell you about Kimchi and Bulgogi.

>> Correct.


Because of Kimchi’s spice, we can relieve our taste when we eat something that oily and unpleasant food.

>> Because of the Kimchi’s spice, we can wash our palate when we eat something that is oily.


 So I eat Kimchi almost everyday.

>> So I eat Kimchi almost every day.


In addition, Bulgogi is also really famous food because it is made with beef or folk.

>> In addition, Bulgogi is also a really famous dish because it is made with beef or pork.




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