Restaurant , Book

This is awesome. Your vocabularies here are really good.  :)

5. We might think fresh food is better than canned food because there are some chemical materials in a canned food.

>> We might think fresh food is better than canned food because there are some chemical found in it.

However, canned food has many advantages in cost, valid date, and convenience part.
>> Correct.

I like canned food for these advantages. 

>> Correct.

 6. I think technology is the best method to solve the food shortage problem.

>> Correct.

 It’s because if people work without machines, it takes a long time to produce crops.

>> Correct.

Machine can produce a huge amount of crops but we need to invent better farming technology.

>> Correct.

1. Actually I don’t like to read books because there are no vivid feeling and there are really compact text.

>> Correct.

Dare I say, I enjoy to read comic books that include many colorful pictures or drawing.

>> Dare I say, I enjoy to read comic books that include many colorful pictures or drawings.

It makes me reading much easier and sinking into the story.

>>  It makes reading and sinking into the story for me so much easier.

 2. The book shows young child’s daily lives.

>> The book shows young about a child’s daily life.

Because of her playful, she always cause a trouble like teasing friends or mom so her mother annoyed with her but I think she truly worry and care about her family and friends.

>> Because of her playfulness, she always causes trouble like teasing her friends or mom. So her mother got annoyed with her.  I believe though that she truly worries and cares about her family and friends.