Resume and Cover letter
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Hi Penny, ^^
I was wondering about your resume and cover letter because I couldn\'t see them in your message. Did you attach it with this message?
T. Alexia
Anyway, I think it will be helpful for you if I correct the grammar of your message. ^^
YOUR MESSAGE:
Hello kind and nice my teacher:))
I\'m Penny
I was so funny to speaking to you every day!
Thank you for accepting my help ,too much
I didn\'t have any experience about the English resume and cover letter.
but this process was so exciting to me during that time.
I\'m so appreciate for you :)))
1.Please check grammer and vocabulary correctly
2.check for readability
->Because I think my resume is so long story but,I didn\'t know How to do summary effectively
3.Skills and Experience is important for me to pass the first process, I wonder these is enough to attract to interviewer Whether it is short or long.
4.Please give me any feedbacks,regardeness of whether it is good or not
I\'m so thank you ,too much:))))))
well.maybe you are laught upon seeing a my photo Ha Ha~:)))
have a good night
CORRECTIONS:
Hello my kind and nice teacher:))
I\'m Penny. It was so funny speaking with you every day! ^^ Thank you so much for accepting my favor.
I didn\'t have any experience about English resume and cover letter, but the process of writing them was so exciting. I appreciate your help, so much! :)))
1. Please check grammar and vocabulary correctly.
2. Check for readability.
-> Because I think my resume is so long but, I didn\'t know how to do summary effectively.
3. Skills and Experience are important for me to pass the first process. I wonder these parts will be enough to attract interviewer, whether they are short or long.
4. Please give me any feedback, regardless of whether it is good or not.
I thank you so much :)))))) Well, maybe you will laugh upon seeing my photo. Ha Ha~:)))
Have a good night.
** Hi Penny, I now checked the grammar of your message. Please have a look and take note of the corrections I made, okay? ^^ Have a good night and I\'ll talk with you tomorrow. ^^
T. Alexia
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