retirement
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Someone said, if you have a lot of money Korea is a good country to live in.
It\'s a rich people\'s paradise.
The qualitie are very high as medical level, safe environment, welfare and public service section etc
But if I have the chance to choose to live in after retirement, I\'d like to live in warmer and calmer country.
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Hi Ms. [이름]!
I am satisfied with your answer that Korea is one of the countries that is good to live in.
Thank you for sharing this.
See you!
Aki~
Someone said, if you have a lot of money Korea is a good country to live in.
>>> CORRECT!
It\'s a rich people\'s paradise.
>>> CORRECT!
The qualitie are very high as medical level, safe environment, welfare and public service section etc
>>> The qualities are very high as medical level, safe environment, welfare, and public service section, etc
>>> There is high quality in terms of medical, safety, welfare, and public service.
But if I have the chance to choose to live in after retirement, I\'d like to live in a warmer and calmer country.
>>> CORRECT!
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