retirement
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I don\'t think about retirement seperately in my life.
Of course I will offically retire at 62 years old, as a principal.
But in my case, even after retirement I will continue my research and lecture.
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I don\'t think about retirement seperately in my life.
>>I don\'t consider retirement as a separate phase of my life.
Of course I will offically retire at 62 years old, as a principal.
>>Of course, I will officially retire as a principal at the age of 62.
But in my case, even after retirement I will continue my research and lecture.
>>But in my case, even after retirement, I will continue my research and lecture.
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