Retreat schedule.
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We are going to go to retreat on July. Today teacher gave school newsletter about retreat.
>> We are going on a retreat on July and today, our teacher gave the school newsletter about the retreat.
There was 96percent about going to retreat. And the school newsletter was about where we are going to retreat.
>> There is 96% of us who are going to the retreat and the newsletter is about where we are going.
There are three options. One is gangwon province and second is Jeju Island the last one is Busan.
>> There are three options. First is in Gangwon Province, second is on Jeju Island and last is in Busan.
I don\'t know where to go but I hope it will not Jeju Island. Jeju Island is too far and it costs a lot.
>> I don\'t know where to go but I hope it will not be Jeju Island because it is too far and it costs a lot.
If I go to gangwon province I will not go to waterpark.
>> If I will choose to go to Gangwon Province, I will not have to go to a waterpark.
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