Revealing someone’s secret
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Hi Claire!
You have some pretty good ideas here.
Thank you for sharing them with me.
Please take note of the corrections below.
See you in class!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
It is hard to say keeping secret is easy.
>> It is hard to say that keeping a secret is easy.
Once the secret came out from the person it is easily going to be spread out with “Don’t tell this to anybody.”
>> Once the secret comes out from a person it is easily going to spread with the words, “Don’t tell this to anybody.”
Luckily, I haven’t told other’s secret to someone else because I don’t have good ability to memorize something.
>> Luckily, I haven’t told another\'s secret to someone else because I don’t have a good ability to remember details
No matter how surprising the story was, I don’t take it seriously and don’t feel about gossipping it.
>> No matter how surprising the story is, I don’t take it seriously and don’t feel like gossiping about it.
It is my merits and also demerits.
>> It is both my good and bad qualities.
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