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Hi,Plz review below. Olympic makes me very interesting thesedays.Surprisingly, current Olympic rank of Korea is third following china and America.Medal qualtity until now is 12. Of the 12 medual, gold medal’s quality is six. We gained three gold medal just tomorrow. It’s that time of year again when you turn-on your air-conditioners. Korean summer are especially difficult to cope with because it gets very hot and sticky.I cannot even imagine getting by a single day without air-conditioning during summer. However, too much air conditioning can cause some health issues. It’s probably caused by your body’s inability to deal with the difference in temperature between indoors and outdoors. The symptoms of nangbangbyung are very similar with common cold ; headache, runny nose, fatigue and chills. In order to avoid this symptoms, we should limit our exposure to the air Conditioning and increase your exposure to the sun as much as we can. Enjoy the rest time of today.

Hi there!Thank you for this interesting composition. A lot of people are very much interested in sports so many people really look forward for the Olympic games. I believe you\'re also good in sports like most Koreans. Moreover, you\'re right about too much exposure to air conditioner isn\'t really good for you. So as much as possible, try to adjust yourself to hot weather. If you get used to it, I\'m pretty sure you\'ll be comfortable with the kind of weather you have now. Anyway, I\'ll just see you in class later! Keep safe and enjoy the rest of Thursday!  ~~ T. Kelly ~~  Hi,Plz review below.>> Hi, please check my sentences below. >> Hi! Please check the following sentences below.Olympic makes me very interesting thesedays. >> The Olympic makes me interested these days. >> Nowadays, I\'m very interested in the Olympics.Surprisingly, current Olympic rank of Korea is third following china and America. >> Surprisingly, the current Olympic rank of Korea is third, following China and America. >> Surprisingly, Korea is third in the ranking, following China and America.Medal qualtity until now is 12. >> Korea already got 12 medals now. >> The quantity of medals Korea received is 12 now.Of the 12 medual, gold medal’s quality is six. >> Out of the twelve medals, six of these are gold.We gained three gold medal just tomorrow.>> We got three medals just yesterday.It’s that time of year again when you turn-on your air-conditioners. >> It\'s the time of year again when we turn on our air conditioners. >> It\'s the season when we need to turn on our air conditioners again.Korean summer are especially difficult to cope with because it gets very hot and sticky. >> It\'s really difficult to adjust with the kind of weather we have in Summer because it\'s very hot and sticky.I cannot even imagine getting by a single day without air-conditioning during summer. >> I cannot even imagine getting by a single day in summer without an air conditioner.>> I cannot even imagine myself working in a single day without an air-conditioner during summer.However, too much air conditioning can cause some health issues. >> Correct  OR; >> However, too much exposure to air conditioner can cause some health problems.It’s probably caused by your body’s inability to deal with the difference in temperature between indoors and outdoors. >> It\'s probably caused by our body\'s inability to deal with the difference of the temperature indoor and outdoor. >> It\'s probably caused by our body\'s inability to adjust with the difference of the indoor and outdoor temperature.The symptoms of nangbangbyung are very similar with common cold ; headache, runny nose, fatigue and chills. >> Correct  OR; >> The symptoms of nangbangbyung are common cold, headache, runny nose, fatigue and chill.In order to avoid this symptoms, we should limit our exposure to the air Conditioning and increase your exposure to the sun as much as we can.>> In order to avoid these symptoms, we should limit our exposure to the air-conditioner and increase our exposure to the heat of the sun as much as we could.Enjoy the rest time of today. >> Correct  OR; >> Enjoy the rest of the day.